Draft edit of old footage

This is a rough edit of our old footage, using premiere we cropped and added scenes and music to make it more watchable as music feels the empty spaces.  As we were doing this we were able to point out our mistakes such as lighting in this is quite bright where as in our new footage we have used a white spot light to create a moon light effect.
The beginning establishing shot is a moving scene which was a problem raised by our teacher, so when we shot the scenes  again we took still images, using natural night to state equilibrium.
Also the mobile scene is tilted which means the audience have to tilt there head whilst watching the trailer which can cause distraction. Using feedback from our teacher we were able to use this feedback upon and filmed the phone up right, focusing on the writing and blurring the background so that audience can keep their attention on what is going on during the scene.